http://narutonation.omgforum.net/stories-f20/-t1.htm Duh? Sat, 30 Aug 2008 16:13:55 GMT 10 http://illiweb.com/fa/empty.gif http://narutonation.omgforum.net/stories-f20/-t1.htm http://narutonation.omgforum.net/stories-f20/this-is-chapter-1-of-the-novel-im-writing-called-silence-of-the-ebony-twilight-t23.htm hellhoundwolf Sorry this is typed on MS paint becuase i dont have word pad. So no spell check and i have poor grammar as is. SORRY! Chapter 1 Raid "Roc" Zane's voice rang clear and deep in the night air. The rider atop the grey horse nudged his mount forward allowing the light of the waxing moon to expose his body. The hulking body was bulging with thick muscles and viens that rippled under his thick hide. His head was that of a bears, his body was covered in a rough layer of brown ... Stories Sat, 30 Aug 2008 16:13:55 GMT http://narutonation.omgforum.net/stories-f20/this-is-chapter-1-of-the-novel-im-writing-called-silence-of-the-ebony-twilight-t23.htm#123 http://narutonation.omgforum.net/stories-f20/this-is-chapter-1-of-the-novel-im-writing-called-silence-of-the-ebony-twilight-t23.htm